Yuki, Please comment :) Uplifting prog. Trance |
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Yuki, Please comment :) Uplifting prog. Trance |
 Feb 2 2010, 11:24 AM
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Newbie  Group: Members Posts: 41 Joined: 19-10-2008 From: Netherlands Member No.: 15.947  |
Hiya, it's been a while..
I made this last Sunday (31th/jan/2010) My first track of the year 2010 (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MSLZhODpR-Q Enjoy & comments are very much welcome (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) |
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Feb 2 2010, 11:45 AM
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Fight the powah! Group: Members Posts: 2.404 Joined: 10-07-2008 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 13.720 |
First of all uplifting etc is not my favorite kind of trance, secondly I don't know anything about producing, so don't know how much my opinion counts for but anyway, some thoughts!
The drumpattern overall could be slightly tuned down.. especially the kick is annoying me a bit, thought of making it a bit more subtle? To me it made the track feel kinda "stale" and a bit boring.. The melody got a really warm, truly uplifting feeling to it and it kinda clashes with the pretty hard kick drum making it lose a bit of that warmness and also making it a bit stale.. and you don't really know what to feel from it (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wacko.gif) I think tuning it down would match the melody better, making the track even more melodydriven. Other than that the melody is really nice & overall it got great potential. Nicely done. Keep it up! A real trancer (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) This post has been edited by erikhag: Feb 2 2010, 11:54 AM |
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Feb 2 2010, 01:43 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 41 Joined: 19-10-2008 From: Netherlands Member No.: 15.947 |
Oh I like that. Thank you very much for the criticism, that's very helpful (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)
I'll try those things out you mentioned (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) |
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Feb 2 2010, 01:45 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 2 Joined: 26-01-2010 Member No.: 31.169 |
Hi Yuki,
First off, an uplifting track must have a melodic touch to it and this one definetly have that. It is a well put together and definetly sounds great. Keep up the good work man... SN QUOTE (Vinnie @ Feb 2 2010, 11:24 AM)  Hiya, it's been a while.. I made this last Sunday (31th/jan/2010) My first track of the year 2010 (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MSLZhODpR-Q Enjoy & comments are very much welcome (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) |
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Feb 3 2010, 10:07 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 41 Joined: 19-10-2008 From: Netherlands Member No.: 15.947 |
@sinfulnature
Thank you (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Will certainly do that! @erikhag I tried out the things you suggested, and it worked out pretty well! Thanks! I will leave the YT video as it is, but if this ever goes out again, it will be the new version! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) Thanks again! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) This post has been edited by Vinnie: Feb 3 2010, 10:07 PM |
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Feb 4 2010, 11:56 AM
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Fight the powah! Group: Members Posts: 2.404 Joined: 10-07-2008 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 13.720 |
Cool! Looking forward to hearing it :]
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Mar 8 2010, 11:34 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 15 Joined: 22-07-2006 Member No.: 6.067 |
I like it. Its very nice and calm
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